THIS ARTIST HAS REQUESTED CRITIQUE ON THEIR WORK
I had a different version of this written out, and I was about to post it when I must have accidentally clicked "Cancel". All that work was deleted.
So, I tried to remember every line I had written down, and I think I got 90% of it right in this revised version. Sadly, I couldn't remember that last 10%.
Hopefully this is acceptable, and not too terrible. Have a good
Did it flow? Or did you find it hard to swallow?
What do you think the message of this poem is?
What are your thoughts on it, all in all?Classic (c)